Critique of Monday’s paper

A1:

  • The picture is a month old for top story
    • That woman has been in several photographs
  • Screenshot from student gov. Story is awkward
  • Too much text in headline for student gov story, takes up too much space
  • Can we abbreviate in sub heads? ARC story
    • Story is about the ARC but not photographed

A2:

  • Older Kams photo
  • Top photo is very large

A3:

  • The mask photo is awkwardly placed
  • Large portrait photo
  • Large photos at the bottom
  • Last photo is a little scary looking

A4:

  • Covalence bottom photo could be smaller
  • Lots of subheading in the paper in general

A5:

  • Large graphics but I like them

A6: 

  • Second headline has awkward space
  • taylor swift story shouldn’t be at the top
  • second story picture is large

B1:

  • Top photo is a little too big 
  • Could use more text

B2:

  • Way too much text
  • Could use another small photo with alumni story if we shrunk the picture on B1 bc there would be less text
  • Picture doesn’t necessarily fit with story
  • Rankings jump is very shory

B3:

  • Don’t love the portrait style picture at the top
  • Similar look every paper

Buzz:

  • Pictures are huge
  • Could use more stories

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